#1
there are lines torn within the skin
that make a young person feel something
there was nothing innocent about it
or else i had no innocence to begin with
i'm not sure what i mean when i say
my head is wrecked
all i was looking for was a f*cking
goodnight text.
#3
me too.
the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones that never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn


#5
Very blunt at points.
Worked well for the end.
Wish the beginning was disguised just a bit more.
Absolutely hate the vagueness of "feel something".
Middle section could have been condensed to half of what it is and still get the same message. However, this could have the most personal value in it's current state.
Promises meant a lot back then.
#7
the universe works in the most disconcerting ways sometimes. seriously.
the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones that never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn