#2
It sounds alright =P

I loved bar 17. Good solo, but I think if you ended the solo with an F# (bar 25) instead of E it'd sound better.

You should definitely finish it, it sounds interesting.
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#3
Quote by Wquennasar


I loved bar 17. Good solo, but I think if you ended the solo with an F# (bar 25) instead of E it'd sound better.


Definitely agreeing with this part, main issue. Would have resolved really strongly with that extra whole tone stretch. A bend on the E would probably work just as well, but it's all preference.
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