#1
but i miss you and i'm sorry i haven't seen you in a while.
you who knows all my secrets, you who sees everything
and you would think that i would have a lot to say
but i don't think words matter between us anymore
like the sun and snow in winter:

you melt me until i'm mush.
#2
i always read your stuff on here because your straight-forward, direct language is very, very refreshing and to be honest, i think you do a very good job of keeping your poetry fresh when it so easily could fall into cliche. It comes across as very sincere by letting us in on certain details. I believe you when you write and that's the biggest thing.

That being said, wasn't a huge fan of the final line. It felt a little juvenile and didn't hold the weight or impact I was hoping to have. Perhaps you could elaborate a little further on the idea or come up with another final line altogether. As it stands now, it doesn't work for me. But that's only my opinion.

Like i said, I'm a big fan of your work and hope you keep posting here.
here, My Dear, here it is