thanks heaps dude!, the drums are written by me and I'm not a drummer so its obvious haha
its in A standard
Sick man, heavy as, like fear factory BAD FREAKIN ASS, i dont know much about this genre of music, i like that breakdown ish thing with the queiter guitar. drums aren't overly exciting but they do sound cool and thats really all that matters. well recorded. jeez. im not good at this stuff. keep it up and dont stop writing.

could ya critique my piece please: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UrOg6Isg1SA

-theascendant; Cheers man, appreciate the feedback!

i liked your song, some great potential there! How did you record it?