#2
I like it, well played and a good recording.

The lead guitar in the intro could have a better tone, perhaps with a tad more overdrive or something. Nice melody though.

The bit from 15 - 30 secs, is that using a delay pedal for the repeated notes? Tbh that section is less interesting than the other parts but perhaps with some singing itll be better. I realise you arent asking for technique crit here but you could use different articulation effects (slides, a bit more vibrato, staccato, that kinda thing) to make that melody more interesting.

I love the octave riffing, great tone, and the section before the outro (2:25 - 2:40) is cool.

And not a bad guitar solo either.

Good luck on your quest for a singer.
But boys will be boys and girls have those eyes
that'll cut you to ribbons, sometimes
and all you can do is just wait by the moon
and bleed if it's what she says you ought to do
#3
Thanks man. This is what i needed. Yea it was a delay on the repeated notes but i revised the lead for that section it sounded a bit too repetitive for me.
#4
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But boys will be boys and girls have those eyes
that'll cut you to ribbons, sometimes
and all you can do is just wait by the moon
and bleed if it's what she says you ought to do