#2
The rhythm is alright. It's generic, but can definitely be improved a lot more. Instead of just letting the chords in the left channel ring out, try throwing in a more exciting rhythm to grab your listener. It's only decent as is. The solo is okay, but it comes out of nowhere. There's no build-up working into the solo. I'd say this sounds more like a clip than a song. The lead's tone could be better. Sounds like there's too much treble.

Thanks for the critique!