Well, this genre of music is nearly totally opposite to what I listen to so it will be hard to give a valuable critic, but from what I have listened to on the "pating a black canvas track" and the one after that, the drummer seems to know what he is doing in his little fills and things.

Also, on the 2nd track when your singer starts to sing at 0:32 (for example) he sounds very nice.

Sorry I cannot crittic you any further, Ive never listened to anything of this genre.