It is good man! But you need to get some bass and drum on it! It lacks the complex sound of the guitar, bass and drums (and maybe some vocals?) together if you understand? The guitar work is great!
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Some interesting ideas in there. The first riff you played (around 0:07) makes me think of Fade to Black. The riff after that makes me think of an Opeth riff (albeit without the intense drumming and growls). The riff around 0:50 is similar to something Protest the Hero might do.

Like Thrash said, try to tab this out and put some other instruments in there. The guitar alone sounds really bare, but you could do some interesting things with these ideas. Though I do recommend getting some new strings.

That's all I have, so .... you know....