#1
Hey guys!

This is my take on brutal death metal. Still unfinished as you can see by the lack of bass and another guitar. The structure is not complete also. Was thinking about adding some keys to this but was unsure so I decided to put this up to gather some feedback.

Cheers!
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BDM.gp5
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Hey Im Looking For Some Tech Death Metal In D

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try anything form avenged sevenfold

I lol'ed.

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Last edited by Peres.T.Peanut at Aug 18, 2011,
#2
c4c please https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1471900

pretty cool but honestly not brutal enough, the 97 000000 thing that was repeated was cool the ending could be a bit better its like u got interesting and then stopped and i was like aw man. Pretty cool just wouldn't really consider it brutal death metal. Also tremolo picking parts didn't seem very emotive or at least as much as i feel they could be.
#3
Thanks for the crit and will crit yours right away.

I actually agree with you now when you say its not brutal enough to be, well, brutal. The tremolo part seemed very one dimensional with only 1 guitar, so I made another guitar track, still no bass though. And the structure is still not complete, but I do understand what you say about the ending :p

Updated version on OP
Quote:
Hey Im Looking For Some Tech Death Metal In D

Quote:
try anything form avenged sevenfold

I lol'ed.

Quote by Basti95
inb4 everyone else, well played
#4
Hey everyone!
I figured this thread would be an excellent place to get some legit feedback.
Do me a favor and check out my band's music at http://www.facebook.com/Alustrium.
I'd really like to hear what you guys think of the music and/or production.
I'm well aware that the production is nowhere near flawless but let me know your thoughts!
thanks!