#1
I've been working on this song for a while and just finished it earlier today. It was recorded with a rockband mic and audacity so the quality isn't that great. Its a bit short but its just meant to be a demo. I'll C4C anyone who asks. Thanks for listening if you did!

http://soundcloud.com/blackcabs/velvet
#3
As terrible as the sound quality is, i actually like the lo-fi sound of this, but it is a little harsh at some points. I agree with 711, sounds a lot like the strokes, i assume thats what you were going for because its extremely similar. Its very good, needs a little work on clarity and timing. Feel like there should be a more shout section somewhere, i.e. a chorus. Its cool though, i like the vocal melody a lot, bass is cool too. Production needs work.

c4c please: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1462564
#4
Really liking this, but your vocals need more work. Shout section would add a whole lot more to the song. Great guitar tones. This needs to be around 3 minutes or so. It seems to stop way too soon. Expected more out of this. Good track, but needs more. Work on those vocals and you'll have yourself a great song.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1462620