Here's a song I wrote recently. Not done yet I'll have the full lyrics soon but tell me if it's any good.

Broken (Don't Stop)

Checked out of the hospital
Yesterday afternoon
For all I know*
I went to slow
Or left too soon

Bleeding on the inside
Hurts like hell to talk
After what you
Just put me through

Your speech has cut me deep
Sliced me like a knife
But I cant stay and weep*
Or get caught up in life
The words have singed my spirit
Burned my heart and mind
I don't want to hear it
Or I will fall behind