I wrote that song a few weeks ago and still can't figure out words and tittle. Would you like to help me with that?
I know that it's too short and mess up however if I've got words it would me much easier to clean this out.

here it is ---> http://www.speedyshare.com/files/29531620/-_-.rar

And another question, would it sound better if would be half step down?

Also your honest opinions would be great
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