#1
i've been writing a bunch of stuff lately, and i've been writing as if no one will ever hear my songs. I feel if you get into a mindset like that, it brings out creativity because you no longer worry about being judged.

Anyways out of the bunch of songs, i actually liked the sound of this one. I stopped doing professional demo's because all my songs are works in progress anyways, and i don't want to spend a great deal on recording. This was recorded with a cheap acoustic, and the Imac microphone.

If you've heard my stuff before, you know i'm not one to do very poetic lyrics. I'm more into the vibe and sound of a song.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/rich2k4/
http://richmusic.dmusic.com

"Those who dream by night, in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that all was vanity; but dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, and make it possible."
#2
I feel like i have heard your stuff before bc your profile picture seems familiar, but i feel like i would remember a voice like that. Im really impressed by that voice, very emotional.

I think the guitar tone feels a little dry. I understand the raw sound your going for, but the guitar feels empty, could be fuller.

I really like the song, good catchy melodies (I dont know anything about anything). It gets a little repetitive and I get lost in the song structure a bit. no real dynamic variation. Needs a more distinctive bridge maybe.
Very cool man, its amazing what you can do with just you and your guitar.

c4c please: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1462564
#3
Don't Know Anything- I quite liked what was present. You have a very nice voice. I agree with the above poster that more variation would benefit the piece, an interlude in the middle, ^a more distinctive bridge, something. Other than that I can't think of anything, I liked the outro a lot. I thought the sound was fine, but I listen to a lot of black metal so I sometimes favour lo-fi lol.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1462874
#4
thanks for listening
http://richmusic.dmusic.com

"Those who dream by night, in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that all was vanity; but dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, and make it possible."
#5
I found the song to be slightly boring to be honest. You can sing well and with the chorus it really seems like you are feeling it and vibing with it. It sounds predictable / happyish. There's not much else to say seeing how you recorded it all with your computer mic.

I heard the beginning of dont ignore me too and that sounds pretty good. I liked that one better, great solo and vocals were spot on with emotion.

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#6
Listening as I type.

The vocals sound good on this recording, but on your other recordings they are a bit pitchy. Like others have mentioned, your vocals are very emotive. They just need some more practice.

Guitar technique needs to be cleaned up. You're hitting unnecessary strings and there are muffled notes. Metronome practice.

This is a good first draft. It'll sound much better with a full band behind it because right now it sounds quite sparse.

Looking forward to the next one. Hope this helped.

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1461784
#7
not bad, i realize its just a rough a demo so obviously all the little kinks and timing issues and vocal things will be worked out as u play it more and record it better, i liked it alot tho, maybe add a diffrent soundung part tho thtll give the listener a sense of a climax or chorus type feel. crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27732800#post27732800
#8
Really like the first song, unlike others i like the rawness, melody could change up abit, repetitve