#3
Well your definitely white. haha just kidding. kinda. I think doubling the rapping is a little much, might just want to do the end of each line, like beastie boys style. I really like when the background melody comes in. I wish there was a little more music behind the rapping. like a bass line or something. The lyrics are actually pretty sick, reminds me of eminem style rapping, good jokes. the main hook should be brought out a little bit. The black guy sounds good, but doubling the rapping again sounds off, he has a good rap voice though. Pretty funny rhymes in there, beat needs to be improved a bit. Nice shit. surprisingly good rhymes for a white dude.

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