#1
Hey, I wrote this song yonks ago. Its like very basic, but basic can always be made good anyone got any comments about it, suggestions on things to add?

It's like your typical song about a kid wanting to be a rockstar

I Wanna Be A Legend

Someday, I wish life could
Just be simple
It would be nice to
Have just a few friends

I wanna be
A legend
A star
One of those...
Rockers

Life should be fun
Not a constant stream
Of nightmares
And bad choices

Every day I practice
No one wants me
Watching them play is
Like torture

I wanna be
A legend
A star
One of those...
Rockers

I wanna be
A legend
A star
One of those...
Rockers
#2
Ahahahahahaahhaahahahha
Most of my grindcore inspiration comes from my hard drive.
#4
Quote by kennykenny
Ahahahahahaahhaahahahha

whatz so funny? i liked it