#3
Pretty cool man. Badass drums, bitchin' synths, awesome guitar part.

I felt that the bass could have come in a little earlier, like when the electric piano lead started, when the drums came in, or right from the very beginning. Having it come in with the guitar leaves me feeling empty.

This needs to be longer! The guitar sounds awesome, but there needs to be a little down time before you change things up. I was in the middle of enjoying the chillness of it all, but then all of a sudden I got guitars invading my earphones. It sounds great, but it needs to happen at the right time, which is much later. Keep working on your songwriting.

A very good effort. Hope this helped.

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1461784