#1
I was looking through the forums, and alot of the pieces I've seen by people are relatively complicated.
So I decided to write something simple and groovy, made of power chords.


Tell me what you think.
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Last edited by Lacunallica at Jul 24, 2011,
#2
It's alright. You should try adding something more into it, it ain't 'going' no where if you catch my drift.
#3
Quote by Hippedkille
It's alright. You should try adding something more into it, it ain't 'going' no where if you catch my drift.



Add more to it?

Any Constructive suggestions?
#4
When listening to it, I can hear a solo in bar 33, try that maybe?
And it seems that this is verse all the way through? Add a build up and a chorus.
Atleast that's what I would try/do
#6
Update.

As I said.
I suck at writing solo's.
Last edited by Lacunallica at Jul 24, 2011,
#9
TS, please DON'T quadruple post.

I found it "cool". The riff is simple but has got that "adrenaline pumping mood" so plus point for you there.
However I feel the riff is a little too repetitive. The solos you put in later on are awesome.

Good Luck,
#10
I'm not really a fan of complicated songs.

This is just meant to be vocal driven, hence the repetitiveness.

I personally thought the solo's sucked but, Cool.
Thanks