#1
*EDIT*
I added a new intro called "Punkrock NEW", please listen and give me some feedback!
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/vismbr/

Hi, i recently recorded 3 demos i've been working on, these songs arn't complete but i recorded what i have so far to get some feedback.

I'm actually not sure what genre this is, but i'd guess some kind of punkrock? I simply like fast songs with alot of melodic leads and riffs, and that's what im trying to make

I would be more then happy to get some feedback on these ideas, the songs are on my profile and are called punkrock song1, song2 and song3. imo song1 is the best, song2 the second best etc.


C4C!
Last edited by vismbr at Nov 17, 2011,
#2
ok here we go SONG2!!

OH WOW it punches very nice, I luv that KICK KICK KICK part. Real good attention grabber.

OK NOW WE ARE CRUISING ON A THOUSAND SMALL AIRPLANES!! Production is very nice, maybe the guitars aare a hint too loud compared to the drums. This would be LOTS OF FUN with a vocalist. With a fun vocalist you definitely have a good product here, this would be fun live. KEEP GOING! : ) ) )

return the luv, my bruv

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1464675

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#3
Thanks, trying to find someone to do some vocals that would fit in
#4
Haha Nightwind your classic.

i love your tone in these songs. Your playing is tight and I suppose the songs are well written, I don't know whenever (if ever) I listen to punk I don't focus on structure just how heavy and fast it is. But yeah, get some vocals on them and they'll be real good
#5
Song 3:
I like the guitar riff a lot. The rhythm guitar is great as well. Excellent recording quality, especially on the drums.
My only complaint is that the double high hat doesn't sound very good in my opinion. I think it would work a lot better with a beat where only one hand is on the high hat.


C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1465105
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#6
Hey, thanks for checking out the song I posted; I'm sorry it's taken me so long to C4C, I've been extremely busy!

All three of the songs have a bit of a Rufio vibe to them I think, which I really enjoyed. All the riffs are solid and I'd love to hear these short clips developed into full songs!

From a production stand point, your low end is very, very muddy. It sounds like there's some reverb on the kick which really just adds this huge boomy-ness to the low end that covers everything up. I feel like for a genre like this, a more present and audible bass is a really nice touch and maybe something you could work on for future releases!
#7
Nice.

Your mixing is great, your guitar work is great, and you've got some tasty riffs.

I don't like how all of your songs sound like Rise Against songs! They are a great band, but you are not Rise Against. You are a unique individual with a unique sound.

As far as songwriting is concerned, you've got some good shit but obviously you need to develop them into full songs. You also might want to try some different intros. If every single song on an album started with the same 4 snare hits, I'd go crazy!

I hope this helped.

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1461784
#8
What are you using for drums? They sound nice, they fit great. So good job with that. There is a little timing issues in Song 2 at the beginning, which seemed weird after how everything else is timed perfectly the entire rest of of the song. I wasn't a fan of how it just cuts to the bass drum, I would of put like a little filler thing with a bass or guitar in there to make it extra awesome. I love how it ended though, great job. You recorded your guitar excellently, it sounds really nice. Good job. You clearly know what you're doing.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27788158#post27788158
#9
Quote by Odirunn


All three of the songs have a bit of a Rufio vibe to them I think, which I really enjoyed. All the riffs are solid and I'd love to hear these short clips developed into full songs!



Never heard Rufio before, just cheked them out and they are awesome thanks

Quote by AeolianInvasion
Nice.
I don't like how all of your songs sound like Rise Against songs! They are a great band, but you are not Rise Against. You are a unique individual with a unique sound.

As far as songwriting is concerned, you've got some good shit but obviously you need to develop them into full songs. You also might want to try some different intros. If every single song on an album started with the same 4 snare hits, I'd go crazy!

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1461784


I don't listen much to rise against, i've heard a few songs though. I am a huge sum41 fan though and have probably taken most my inspiration from them.


Quote by rockfan7


Addictive drums, try to mess around with different settings, so not sure what settings ive used on these.

Thanks!
#10
Really nice riffs and I like your tone, it sounds a little bit metalish Besides the songs sound like they'd have some Metallica influence and probably they have a bit, after all you've covered their two songs These are really great ideas though you need to develop them, but you already know that. So keep up the good work, hope you'll finish these songs and find someone to record vocal.

Cheers and if you have some time check these two

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1457522

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1455849
#11
Those three songs are great. Absolutley amazing punk is my favourite genre these are really great quality, well performed are melodious and thrashy and agressive brilliant stuff!

If you don't mind something a little less punk more folk would love a c4:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1467287
thanks
#14
Song 3:

Woah, wasn't expecting that. I actually enjoyed it. Short and sweet. Good job.

Song 2:

Nice riff. Feels as if this one and song 3 could be merged together in some way. The recording quality is nice, and surprisingly not muddy. I'm not too fond of the drums, but that's just because I'm not really into this kind of music.

Song 1:

Again, this seems like it could be merged with the other two, to make one great song. I clearly hear why this one is your favorite. My favorite too. But song 2 is also pretty good. This just seems like there is a bit more work put into it.

Good job! Would love some longer songs, maybe with vocals.

C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27662231#post27662231
#15
Thanks for all the feedback
Last edited by vismbr at Nov 17, 2011,