#1
Hey, people.

I've been trying to improve my songwriting, and this is the product. Unfortunately, I have no recording gear, save for a webcam, so it's all in midi But hopefully the idea's there. Obviously there's no playing to criticise, but if possible, could you post your thoughts on the song as a whole? Any parts you like/ dislike, and why? Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oi7n54darOk&feature=channel_video_title
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#2
cool style. I like it mostly, i'm not sure all the notes are needed for the down scales though, just my opinion though. Since it was with a Midi I cant really critique much, some parts didn't quite flow right, but i think that'll chance when you do a live recording of it. Best of luck

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1464543