#2
What are we evaluating? The music itself sounds good, could be interesting with a full band. I like the odd passing notes that give it a jazzy feel.

You're theory sucks though =/ Not quite sure why you threw in a couple of random barre lines? It should be a barre line every 4 beats in 4/4. It plays fine, but theorically it's hard to read and follow if that makes sense?
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#3
Thanks for the reply.

I don't have a clue how to write music... I just put in the notes and listened for where I wanted to put things in. I actually don't know what a barre line is.
#4
On your second row of music, there's 2 lines that go down inbetween the notes. Those are barre lines

Word to the wise...learn music theory, even if it's just the basics. It makes life so much easier =]
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yeah fire him secretly... thats what im doing except im firing myself and secretly joining someone elses band

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thanks for the compliment man!