I think your guitar may have been a little out of tune, I would fix that. But this is a pretty sweet set of riffs you've got. I like its feel, but the tune takes away from it quite a bit. i might add some lyrics or a drum loop to give it a little more depth. But overall its pretty good. Just watch out for your tuning
c4c: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1464865
I didn't mind it, still needs a little work.
In the beginning it sounded pretty great but for some reason it was like your guitar was going out of tune as you were playing it. Haha...
I assume that wasn't the case though.
When you got up to the part with the chords it started to not flow as well, and some of the parts were not that audible.

The sound quality is poor, but you already know that.
The performance started out strong then went kinda weak as it progressed.
As a song overall, looking past quality and performance/tuning issues, I think it's really quite good.

C4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1464595
Yeah, I played it on a guitar I dropped a lot. The bridge is filled with super glue

Tuning is a major issue after 20 seconds...

I'll get some proper equipment to record on when I get some cash!!!

Thanks for the replies,