#1
Just a simple song I made after messing around on my guitar. Still a work in progress. A lot different than what I normally write. The chords in the chorus-type part sound kind of dissonant for some reason but maybe that's just me? Anyway, let me know what you think! Feedback is appreciated!
Attachments:
sincerety.gp5
sincerety.mid
#2
Little too repetive in my opinion. The riff is semi-catchy.
Some how I just felt I boring, especially in the drum solo.
Try adding some rhythm to back up the drum solo.
I liked the ending, but I suggest you to use some variation.
Overally the song was cool.
#3
Quote by blacknex
Little too repetive in my opinion. The riff is semi-catchy.
Some how I just felt I boring, especially in the drum solo.
Try adding some rhythm to back up the drum solo.
I liked the ending, but I suggest you to use some variation.
Overally the song was cool.

Yeah the drum solo thing was just an experiment I do agree that it gets repetitive. I'll try to break things up a little. Thanks!
#4
Okay so I edited the song and made some changes here and there for more variety. I also tried to make the drum solo more interesting. I'm not really sure what else I would add to the solo to back it up
Attachments:
sincerety(edit).gp5