#1
Hey guys! Recently I took some interest in grindcore.some riffs came to my head and I tryed to make something out of it :P

Just give me some feedback if you please ^^

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Flesh Fueled Forge.gp5
Flesh Fueled Forge.mid
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#2
I wasn't a huge fan of the fast riffs from 5-15, it could very well be the midi's fault though. The intro/end riff was very cool though. Idk, it's so short there's not a whole lot to critique.

It was like a lot of grindcore for me where the parts I don't like go by so quickly that they don't take much away from the song/good parts.
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#3
After a few more listens and whatnot, the riffs from 5 to 12 did seem a litle bland/boring. Not sure I made it better, but it does sound good to me...
Attachments:
Flesh Fueled Forge (1).gp5
Quote:
Hey Im Looking For Some Tech Death Metal In D

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try anything form avenged sevenfold

I lol'ed.

Quote by Basti95
inb4 everyone else, well played