#1
i want to pull all of the lies i've told you
back out of your skull and bury them
between the pages of my homework journal
where i collect every inch of you to read
and re read
so i can love
and re love
over and over again,
i don't think i have ever seen
light accentuate on such perfect skin
but i'm so sad and sick of everyone
meghan, you have to take me away soon
the batteries in my s.a.d light have run out
the batteries in my body have run dry.
Last edited by Dylan_ at Jul 29, 2011,
#2
You misspelled scull, but content wise, I think this was utterly flawless. Especially the ending - it was so good. I will read some of your other stuff and will definitely look out for upcoming things. Keep writing, man.

If you don't mind reading one of my recent poems, that'd be nice
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1458332
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