Heheh ... that was quiet good for a jam and the little sweepin solo was a nice surprise after the doublebass part ... your drummer needs a little more "foot-practise" i think ... but there was a lot of realy realy good ideas in this jam ... soundwise this is more a cassette recorder in rehearsal room ... and this makes it quiet difficult to get the riffs and especialy the snare drum exactly ... but i think with good sound and epic vocals this can become a very cool song

keep your good work going and i hope to hear some more of you in "studio quality"

for c4c this is mine


Greatz M