#1
backtrack i recorded just loops, so don't expect too much from me.
just a rough sketch hahh.
what can i say, this is the first song ive wrote hah, and it's in its beta stage hah.

i did screw up a bit but whatever hah, just a rough sketch.
send some feedback, thanks!

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<Instrumental pop rock>

edit: don't mind about the recording quality and how i recorded hah, i just want feedback on the actual song

C4C
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I
Last edited by whoahesgood at Jul 30, 2011,
#2
Thanks for the crit bro.

Your guitar's got a good sound. You're timing's pretty good, but could use a little tightening up. My biggest issue with your technique is your bends. You need some more practice bending strings up to precisely the right note because a lot of your bends were flat.

It's a good start. Also, think about getting some decent recording equipment because that will really improve your sound.

hope this helps!
#4
Thanks for the feedback?

What about the melody? Did you like it? :O
Some of the parts I messed up because I didn't finish making the song hah
Gear

Ibanez RG350DX Electric Guitar With DiMarzio Tone Zone
Academy Electric Guitar
BeaverCreek Acoustic Guitar

Roland Micro Cube Amp
Academy 15W Amp
Peavey Vypyr 30
Peavey Sanpera Footswitch I