#1
Hi all - I just recently uploaded my music to soundcloud and would like to share it with you all, if you'll be willing. I would be happy to listen to your music as well and c4c haha.

My Music

Mostly it is just my messing around on guitar, nothing recorded professionally but maybe soon it will be. Now I just want to know how to improve and what it sounds like to other people. Thanks again -

Zach
Check out my music, if you please.
#2
I liked fear the creeper, it reminded me of the intro to 'spanish caravan'. and nice use of the delay effect (also liked rain and lonely propositions). My crits would be to get a 'hook' in your songs, make them longer and insert a vocal line! very good guitar work though, and very interesting

C4C?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pOsM6lviGiY

cheers
#4
Quote by weorge
I liked fear the creeper, it reminded me of the intro to 'spanish caravan'. and nice use of the delay effect (also liked rain and lonely propositions). My crits would be to get a 'hook' in your songs, make them longer and insert a vocal line! very good guitar work though, and very interesting

C4C?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pOsM6lviGiY

cheers


critted on the vid, holmes. thanks much!
Check out my music, if you please.
#5
Latino - Fix the panning so that it's not all in my left ear

Mix - The chord progression is very common, but the guitar parts became progressively more interesting as it went. Did not like the muffled plucking/percussion bit in the middle.

I agree, fear the creeper is probably your best tune so far, but what happened to the vocals? I wanted more of that.

You've got some interesting ideas, but a lot of it just sounds like noodling on the guitar. I'd like to hear a more developed sound with a definitive song structure, lyrics, etc.

Please review me (There is only one hifi song, the low fi songs are on a diff channel)
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1466458