#3
Quote by weorge
nice work, well sung, well played and well written! a new song every week for 6 months, thats ambitious and I wish you good luck with that! my only crit would be that the vocals overpower the guitarwork, especially at the very end.

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1464141



Thanks for that , agree I probably should have automated the vocal levels towards the end... Did your C4C
#5
Nice!

Your vocals are good. Awesome falsetto. It does sound like you're singing through a cold in a few parts, but overall very solid work.

The guitar work is very good and chill sounding. You've really got your technical shit together.

I like your lyrics, and your intelligence shows through in your writing, but I get the feeling that some of it rambles on too much. Like, you're using way too many words to convey a message when a simple phrase would suffice.

The song's structure varies enough to keep it interesting but none of it sounds too out of place. Perfect.

I hope this helps

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1461784
#6
Quote by AeolianInvasion
Nice!

Your vocals are good. Awesome falsetto. It does sound like you're singing through a cold in a few parts, but overall very solid work.

The guitar work is very good and chill sounding. You've really got your technical shit together.

I like your lyrics, and your intelligence shows through in your writing, but I get the feeling that some of it rambles on too much. Like, you're using way too many words to convey a message when a simple phrase would suffice.

The song's structure varies enough to keep it interesting but none of it sounds too out of place. Perfect.

I hope this helps

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1461784


Thanks man, I appreciate that. You're right, i probably could refine the lyrics a little.. Thanks a lot for your crit, I've just done C4C. Ardvaark, yours is coming right up!