Basically I cant really try to critically judge my own voice anymore from hearing it so much, and I need some other people to tell me what it is exactly I should focus on to sound better

I've only ever really had one proper teacher back in '08 when i started so I really need a new set of ears to tell me what I'm doing right and ESPECIALLY what I'm doing wrong, so here's a clip


it's just a random mic check but hopefully you get the idea, tell me if I should upload any vocal runs in particular to clear anything up.
try uploading to megaupload or something... im having trouble accessing the file