#2
joHANEN,
Pretty wild! I liked the pitch bend on the heavier part. I wasn't expecting this part where it's relatively mellow, that was actually my favorite part of the song. I personally liked the melodic singing a lot more than the screaming vocals, but I rarely like screaming vocals. Trippy synth or vocal effect, I liked that! Audio quality is quite good, and all of the playing is tight. The synth ending sounded very good. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1465574
#3
Quote by aaron aardvark
joHANEN,
Pretty wild! I liked the pitch bend on the heavier part. I wasn't expecting this part where it's relatively mellow, that was actually my favorite part of the song. I personally liked the melodic singing a lot more than the screaming vocals, but I rarely like screaming vocals. Trippy synth or vocal effect, I liked that! Audio quality is quite good, and all of the playing is tight. The synth ending sounded very good. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1465574

Thanks for your comment!
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#4
very good song. the guitar tone is great. the mellow part adds good contrast to the chaotic riffs. the bending riff has a bit of a lamb of god feel to it, which isn't bad. also, speaking of lamb of god, your singer has a high scream very similar to randy blythe, which i thought was pretty cool. keep up the good work!

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#5
Holy shit that's tasty.
At 3 minutes, i turned my speakers up for that hook such a massive groove to it. Towards the end i was waiting for something new to happen but that's my only criticism, loved it dude.
Always waiting for that bit of inspiration.
#6
Pretty nice. Not much for t3h br00tz breakdown riffs (which I believe are overdone in both the genre and this song to a certain extent), but the guitar tone is tight and clear, the way I like it.
Vocals, as mentioned before are reminiscent of Randy Blythe, which I enjoy. Heard some good riffs and composition between the breakdowns, dig the syncopation at 3:00, and there is some great mixing.


C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1331278
Then there's this band called Slice The Cake...

Bunch of faggots putting random riffs together and calling it "progressive" deathcore.
Stupid name.
Probably picked "for teh lulz"

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