That's really a beautiful song man. It would sound great with some vocals. I really don't even have anything to add.
What tuning were you using? Also do you plan on doing this with a whole band or is it meant to be just a guitar piece? I really think it would be good with a full band.

I know this was a pretty shitty crit but if you could check out my song I'd appreciate it. If you have any other songs let me know.
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Thanks guys. I want to put a vocal melody over the top but being the shit singer that I am I'm waiting for a chance to give it to a vocalist.

The initial idea was to put a band behind it but nothing ott. Drums a bit of bass etc etc but I'v not got round to writing the parts for it.

Aha, the guitar is tuned to DADADD

Again, thanks for the thoughts

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