#2
The second riff was pretty good. You should try to make these riffs flow a little better (not having a 2 second pause between each one is a good start). I wouldn't really call this a piece

Try making a full song, I could actually like it, which is not usual. Riff 3 was way too straightforward. More polyrhythmic goodness, please.
E:-6
B:-0
G:-5
D:-6
A:-0
E:-3
#3
thanks for the critique, i'll apply it to my 'piece' and post back later
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