#1
okay so I dont exactly know as far as lyrical content what i would even begin to base this song around so if anything jumps out at you, holler at your boy. the instrumental is on my profile creatively titled 'Temporary Instrumental.'

any thoughts and/or suggestions would be just peachy, and I can C4C if that would tickle your fancy

EDIT: Oh and obviously it becomes a bit repetitive without vocals

and dont be shy to tell me your thoughts on general mixing and other post-recording thoughts as well
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Last edited by MattsRichardson at Aug 2, 2011,
#2
Matt,
I think the guitars, drums & synths sound quite good, but yes, I feels like it needs vocals. You need to write vocals that speak to your own heart, but if it were me, I'd write something spiritual or something pertaining to religion since it has the vocal choir sound, but that's just me. Sounds good so far! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1465574