#1
Im gonna miss my buddy

Intro: D Bb G A D Ab C G D Acoustic Guitar
D Bb
Im gonna miss my buddy, im gonna miss my little man

G A
For im going back to war, and he dont understand

D Bb G A
What do i say, What do i say, What do i say, What do i say

D
I dont know

Ab C
Im so far away, where i dont wanna be
G D
But i know you be ok, your mom will talk to me
Ab C
She'll tell me how your doing, in school and everything
G D
But its not the same, i'll miss you everyday
D Bb
I know i haven't been there, but when you look at me
G A D
Know that i'm your daddy, you mean everything to me
Bb G
And i'll be in your future, you wait and see
A D
This war wont stop, this heart in me
Ab C
I'll be there real soon and i know you'll be strong
G D
For this blood in your veins was meant to carry on
Ab C
Into the future as far as it can
G D
till God turns this place into the promise land
D Bb
I miss my buddy, i gonna miss my little man
G A
For i'm back in this war and you dont understand

D Bb G A
What do i say, What do i say, What do i say, What do i say
D Bb G A
What do i say, What do i say, What do i say, What do i say
D
I dont know
Last edited by Sniperguy69 at Aug 8, 2011,
#2
I wrote this song back in 2007 when i was deployed to Iraq, and i just thought i would share it because it means a great deal to me. I hope you enjoy it..
#4
Very very inspiring, god bless you friend, you have hear a song with a meaning, you didn't just throw something down on paper because it sounded cool, you have a story for it, you put your soul into this man! Nothing I can suggest that needs fixing, this was great, thank you for serving this country friend, god bless!
#5
This is pretty good, I'm guessing it's a bit bluesy?

I would try and add some more imagery, and change the structure of it a little to keep interest, cause it was kind of hard for me to read and I lost focus a couple times. Also don't stop there, I think there's a lot more to this piece, maybe not only talking about your (I'm guessing, excuse me if I'm wrong) son, but also some other aspects of being in war that bring out a certain emotion in you or that you feel is important.

I'll be there real soon and i know you'll be strong
For this blood in your veins was meant to carry on


I thought these two lines were great.
Hope to read some more from you dude

Last edited by ali.guitarkid7 at Aug 12, 2011,