#1
Just finished this last night and i would appreciate some feedback on it, regarding the mix/production, composition, instruments, or anything you can think of Thank you and C4C if you leave a link!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5Fw4f45AGQ

P.S. Be patient as it takes a while for the metal to kick in
#3
Quote by 12Jim34
Just finished this last night and i would appreciate some feedback on it, regarding the mix/production, composition, instruments, or anything you can think of Thank you and C4C if you leave a link!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5Fw4f45AGQ

P.S. Be patient as it takes a while for the metal to kick in


Very cool, I always liked that theme and I like the spin you put on it. Great job!

C4C: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1466134
#4
Your previous rendition of this was far, FAR better. If you're doing another album, please, for the love of god, don't put this on it.
At about 1:35, what ever you were doing there sounded horrible, and made me want to vomit TBTH. Section after that you tried far to hard to make it 'heavy', when it really didn't need it. Wasn't too keen on the clean-ish tone closer to the end, but it wasn't any thing too major.