the only objection i have to the rerecorded version is the guitar is not loud enough. in fact, all the instruments are not mixed high enough. other than that, good stuff!

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The cymbal hits are mixed so they're louder than everything else, and that's mildly off-putting. other than that, I don't see anything to complain about.
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thought I was dreaming
of you...

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Thanks for reviewing both of my songs! Because of that I am reviewing your newer version. Unfortunately, I can only hear the song on these small computer speakers (today), so it's not the greatest way to judge the mix. But, it does sound better on this particular computer, so that's good. The guitar & drums sound better defined for me. The snare sounds pretty loud, but it's probably these little speakers. Keep rockin' man!