When I saw your title I had to take a look at your song, I've been messing around with a song with the same title. Parts of it seemed a little rough, a couple of the transition I mean. I think you would do well to put rhythm with your solos, besides that its pretty good. You might try working on the sound quality, but that's about it.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1467694