#2
Listening to The Likelihood My Jaw Will Break and I liked the verse, but the end part of the chorus and the bridge sounded a bit off and ruined the beat a bit.

The rest of the song was very fun and kept my attention. Really digging the piano bit. The vocalist is also very talented
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#3
I like the beginning to Never Ending Dial Tone. Very creepy and cool. And now free-jazzy? Gets better and better. Awesome synthy solo part. The wah guitar works well, and its a cool solo. Like your little arpeggio part. Very very good in all!

The Likelihood My Jaw Will Break was a bit screamy and loud in places for me. That is kind of just my personal taste though. I did like some parts of it.

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