#3
Pssh, I liked the vocals. It kinda fits the mellow groove that these guys went for. Way to go!
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#5
The flutist was definitely the highlight of the video, especially when he took that solo. And the funky twist on the guitar part was really cool too. The vocals were the only weak part to me, but I had a hard time even caring about them once I could tell how much fun you guys were having.
#6
I like how you totally switched up the groove. It'd be nice to hear this recorded well so the vocals would come out. But the flute was definitely an awesome addition and made the song. Seriously, give it a shot actually recording it and see what happens!

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