Decided to stray away from Metal for a while, and decided to write a rockish song, based on a couple of riffs I made up while jamming. Also uploaded the MP3 file, because I wrote this on GP6 and all the levels and stuffz are messed up on the other files, and GP6 RSE just sounds better. Influenced probably by Soul Survivor by Gorefest. C4C is applied here. Hope you enjoy.

Here's the link for the MP3:http://www.mediafire.com/?8p3ay1pcpqgpwur
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Really enjoyed this, was cool and interesting. Only flaw I can think of is that some of the interludes dragged on a little, but the rest (particularly the first solo section) compensates for it by miles. It retains a strangely dark sound and an even stranger upbeat sound, the fade out at the end works well, wouldn't change much about this, maybe cut down the first interlude by a couple bars, or alternate some drum beats during it to keep it interesting.

Would you mind just taking a little look at https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1467770, I don't know if it would be your thing, but it's the only thing I've submitted
Thanks for the crit on my song, but sadly I think I'll scrap it, dissect it and use it in other songs. It just feels too random.

However! This was fantastic! I really like the happy riff that starts at 6, and the chords/lead you used at 16 adds up nicely. I can't really say that anything sounds really off. It all transitions nicely and have great flow. The only thing that sounds kind of weird is the arpeggio at 103 but I think I know what you were going for.

As for improvement, make it longer and add a riff or two. But otherwise, not much really. I'd love if you were to record it.

Edit: Another thing would be to change the lead to overdrive, but that's just personal preference.
Last edited by CheesyMozarella at Aug 5, 2011,
Very great work.. it really shows a great amount of time spent (which totaly paid off)
I really enjoyed the chord pregression on the riff at bar 6, nice verse, also nice hammer ons all the way through.
I would change one thing, the instrumental bridges, I would make them shorter in order to give the song a more dynamic feeling.