So, because of all the wonderful advice I've gotten from you UG'ers, I've gone back and redone a buttload of my songs. Here's the latest one: http://soundcloud.com/hfhband/firecracker

PS. I fulfilled all my C4C on my last thread, but it took longer than I would have liked. All Apologies to those that waited 4 days for feedback. (I'll do my best to get it done quicker this time.)