#2
Sounds pretty good, but try to sing more fluent and connect the sentences more this way. Make them flow into eachother if that makes sense to you.
"Don’t be a guitarist. Be a musician."

Steve Howe
#3
Quote by von gelb
Sounds pretty good, but try to sing more fluent and connect the sentences more this way. Make them flow into eachother if that makes sense to you.


Like it sounds like I am singing each word instead of each sentence?
#4
Sorry for the late response, but that's kinda what I mean. Mostly you cut the sentences short at the end of each line, but it would sound better if you hold the last word longer and let it flow into the next sentence.
"Don’t be a guitarist. Be a musician."

Steve Howe
#5
Well, i'll admit I wasn't expecting that at all, very unique; even as a metal head and composer myself (My music can be found in sig!) that wasn't half bad.
Last edited by Deadbeat606 at Aug 24, 2011,