#1
so a year ago I made a song for some guitar competition in Croatia,and then forgot the password to my yt acount.but today I accidentally found it,and it isn't so bad as I remember it was.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CcOEJpUnsx0
it could be played better but I hadn't enough time to practice it and I had to recorded at my friends place since I don't have the proper equipment to record...ignore the cheesey letters
#3
In the beginning, the third note you hit, was wickedly out of tune, and is out from there on in, but its actually a pretty solid song for a first.... The drums come in and overshadow everything, including the lead guitar, which isn't good. Its a gated snare sound, I presume? It needs to come down, its far too loud. The lead suffers from Too-Many-Words-Syndrome, there are just too many licks presented too quickly for it to be memorable.

I usually use For The Love Of God as a basis to test guitar instrumentals for TMW Syndrome... He starts off pretty simply, re-uses a bunch of the same licks, and gradually adds things in to make it more complex, eventually hitting a climax in complexity. You've got that climax in complexity, but the curve is a bit awkward.

Don't get me wrong, its a solid song from the technical point of view, but it just wasn't particularly memorable, and you've probably gotten much better now.

My guitar playing isn't particularly technical, but C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1467883