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Hello UG,

I just finished this song literally 10 minutes ago after a lightening fast recording session, and I would love your opinion on it. It's called "The Story of You and Me", and it's at the top of my profile. Any thoughts you folks have for improving it--as it is a bit rough as is--would be greatly appreciated, and I'll happily listen to whatever you all have been working on!

Thanks, and keep rocking!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/SchmifftyFive/

P.S. My work schedule is crazy for the next few days, so it may take a bit for me to C4C back, but I PROMISE I'll do my best to help you folks out!

Edit: Whoops! Forgot the link to my profile lol
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Last edited by SchmifftyFive at Aug 6, 2011,
#2
Thanks for that, appreciated man. BTW some of those sweeps were really unnecessary (and weren't even written for it) I just was a bit of a show off back then hehe. But thanks anyway for the kudos.

Just saying this, I'm not that metal head that bashes every other genre.. This is a real good song. I couldn't tell you much what I think of it in a technical sense or anything, but I can say that I really enjoy this. You play your guitar well, singing fits, and it builds up all pretty nicely. Be happy that you wrote this, it's real good And keep this up