#1
Hey guys! Can you give me some constructive critique on my Slow Blues Jam in my profile? It would be very nice! So tell me what you think! (and C4C of course! )

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Pettah/

Its played with this backingtrack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1WM5FC5_gPA
and recorded with my phone hehe.

Maybe this should be in the recording forum but since its a critique of my improvisation I thought it would be good here.

Thanks!
#2
Very lyrical, thought Comfortably Numb was going to start playing on a couple of those licks :P
Try going back with this and do rhythm too.
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