#1
This is something I've been working on for a while, but I still think a few solo guitar parts here and there need to be changed. Everything was recorded with a single microphone as I don't have a mixer.

The lyrics use the concept of a hurricane as a metaphor to show the rise and fall of a relationship.

Please let me know what you think! Any criticism good or bad is much appreciated.

Thanks

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#2
critiquing while i listen

ok wow that high not could get annoying... ok I see where you're going with it... nice feel to it kind of like Andy McKee? Not as awesome though (but then again who could be haha).... vocals are a bit quiet, get them turned up a but... the voice sounds good just can't hear it.... hmm seems like its gonna pick up but no it just ends. (not that that's a bad thing dont worry)

over all 7.5/10

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