hope you take this as a compliment but it reminds me of early Good Charlotte! You sound a lot like the lead singer haha, anyways... good song a bit too slow for my liking and the vocals are great it just sounds poorly recorded, but then again we can't have perfect recording equipment. There are a few parts where it seems out of tempo other than that great dude! Kepp it up

c4c https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1468065
Thank you both. Yeah, my vocals aren't that strong yet, I've only been singing for about a year or so. Also, it was recorded on a shitty camera and then I took the audio from it, so yeah, finding a new way to record is probably my best bet.
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When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....
not bad, the intro seemed to go on forever, i would shorten tht up abit. vocals arent bad, with some practice and better recordindg they could sound alot better tho. guitar was decent, came off time here and there, not a bad song tho, it just seems very repeptive, theres no real "chorus" or climax type feel to it. not to bad tho
Your vocals need a lot of work, but the good news is that the general sound of your voice is great and I feel it will be very versatile and capable once you improve your pitch control and volume.

Your band needs to practice together more, with a metronome. Also, decent recording equipment is expensive, but I think you'll find that it's worth the investment if you're serious about your music.

Keep up the good work. Hope this helps

didnt see smoke and mirrors on the fb page? so im doing pearly gates instead. obviously the recording isnt great but it gets the job done. the main riff is pretty interesting i like it, parts with both guitars are often out of time, that needs some work. the ending of the song is nice, it i can def see it being a huge closer with a bit of work. good song man. c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27857749#post27857749