#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=veiaF9IJlVs

I'm just a normal teenager who likes to write songs. I really need feedback, because I'm working on developing my own style and getting a feel of where I am musically. Please give me some feedback or tell me what you think. (: Thank you so much!!!
#2
Rocker740,
Regardless of age, the guitar sounds very good (playing, tone, & chords)! Vocal melodies & lyrics are good! Singing is OK, slightly pitchy at times. The tone of the vocals sounds like you have a very slight delay (which I think sounds somewhat odd for an acoustic guitar song), not sure if you're using 1 or 2 mics. If you are using 2 mics at once, that could be why. You might have to record each separately if you wanted to avoid that (if you like the effect, then pay no attention to that comment). Being as young as you are, you'll probably only get better if you keep at it. Keep at it! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1465574
Last edited by aaron aardvark at Aug 9, 2011,