#1
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2974259/SEE%20BOUNCE%203.mp3

song my band is doing, vox are going in on Thursday and there is some bass and guitar editing still to do. let me know whatcha all think


Rhythms are 60/40 Dual Rec/GH50L and the leads are all my Laney GH50L


any more questions on mic'ing or whatever just ask

you can check out my band "remaliah" on facebook or myspace too if you'd like


as always C4C

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2974259/SEE%20INTRO%20CHANGE%20AND%20BRIGHTER.mp3 updated mix
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Last edited by Bostonrocks at Aug 10, 2011,
#2
Really cool intro, I'm really digging the bass in that part.

It sounds pretty good, I don't have much to criticize, everything sounds tight, guitars are great.
I feel like I need to listen to the vocal part to get a final impression.
#3
Quote by Just_Matt
Really cool intro, I'm really digging the bass in that part.

It sounds pretty good, I don't have much to criticize, everything sounds tight, guitars are great.
I feel like I need to listen to the vocal part to get a final impression.



Cool man, I wish I had written that riff, because its freaking good haha. the clean intro is actually my eventide pitchfactor on the "Crystalize" setting


as soon as I have a bounce with vocals I'll update the thread!
Quote by gregs1020
Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#4
wow sounds good man. interesting lead parts over the rhythm. nothing to crit there. see mine at my profile
#6
Catchy as all hell
I just hope some girly sounding guy does vocals, not to be offnsive I think it's a great song and I'd want to hear the whole album can you direct me to the bands page if there is one?

btw I could use some tips regarding your comments on the drum track to my song... yours seems like programmed drums, are they?
#7
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Catchy as all hell
I just hope some girly sounding guy does vocals, not to be offnsive I think it's a great song and I'd want to hear the whole album can you direct me to the bands page if there is one?

btw I could use some tips regarding your comments on the drum track to my song... yours seems like programmed drums, are they?



http://www.facebook.com/remaliahmusic this is us.

no offense taken, we actually have a girl singer so.


the drums on our track are a mix of real drums and slate samples. the cymbals are real and there is some room mic mixed in.
Quote by gregs1020
Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#8
Quote by Bostonrocks
http://www.facebook.com/remaliahmusic this is us.

no offense taken, we actually have a girl singer so.


the drums on our track are a mix of real drums and slate samples. the cymbals are real and there is some room mic mixed in.


Oh! Well I'll forget i imagined that haha. Looking forward to hear your singer.
#10
I'm not good at explaining things, but yeah this is an awesome song.
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#11
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I like the energy and the riffs. Sounds very polished. I really needs a vocal track to balance it out. It could be killer with the right vocals. It's pretty good the way it is.

Would you take a listen to Picasso's Landscape?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1468526



Thanks man, I'll bump the thread (if its ok with the mods) when I update it with the vocal track. and you can check it then!


I will take a listen to yours in a few minutes
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Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


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When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#12
Loved the intro! The guitar riff at 0:11 was SEXY.

I'm getting a very outdated 80's/Dragonforce vibe from this song. There's nothing inherently wrong with that, but it doesn't exactly sound like what you would normally hear on an alt rock station.

It sounds like a clean production. The whole band sounds like they've got their technical shit together. The only thing that sounded slightly amaturish was the muted single string stuff at 3:00.

I hope this helps

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1469290
#13
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Loved the intro! The guitar riff at 0:11 was SEXY.

I'm getting a very outdated 80's/Dragonforce vibe from this song. There's nothing inherently wrong with that, but it doesn't exactly sound like what you would normally hear on an alt rock station.

It sounds like a clean production. The whole band sounds like they've got their technical shit together. The only thing that sounded slightly amaturish was the muted single string stuff at 3:00.

I hope this helps

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1469290



Yeah, we're definitely not trying to be on an alt rock station. We have a rock station around here that we're trying to get it on.

the muted single string stuff might be retracked, that or we'll edit the crap outta it so its epic tight.


i'll check yours out soon
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Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#14
the intro is a very smooth transition into the next part, well written. like someone else said, the rhythm guitar could use some treble. i really like the guitars in the chorus, very energetic. the buildup at the end was well executed, but i feel like you could use one or two beats of silence just before the final chorus so it hits harder. good song tho man, i really liked it! c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27857749#post27857749 you should check out multitudes if you can
#15
Nice work! can't wait for the vocals. Hopefully it will not be screaming all the way.
the end is also pretty cool. Liked you on facebook so i can keep up with the progress


thanks for your comment on my thread.
#16
only thing I would say is maybe use a little less palm mute on the chords about 30 secondsinto the song. Other than that it's really cool
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#17
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only thing I would say is maybe use a little less palm mute on the chords about 30 secondsinto the song. Other than that it's really cool



? you mean like the pre-chorus?


also. updated mix

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2974259/SEE%20INTRO%20CHANGE%20AND%20BRIGHTER.mp3
Quote by gregs1020
Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#18
Well, this really is a pro recording. This sounds brilliant. I especially like the lead riff at about 1:00. And the bass riff at 3:00 is great. Don't hear enough of those. This definitely sounds like it could be a great song. As long as the singer doesn't ruin it, it can be great. Any hints on what the lyrical content might include? I'm actually pretty excited to hear the finished version of this song.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1469032