#1
Track is called Aimless Endeavours (should be first on the mp3 list in my profile).

First part is kinda similar to Cynic stuff, but much simpler (it is repeated three times through the song a la chorus).
Then it goes into first solo, that is just a typical rock solo... nothing special.
Next part is a riff with some melodies added over it later.
Then it goes to the first part and a punk riff later (with the second solo).
There is no new material later towards the end of the song.

Recorded with Audacity. Drums and bass are from GP5.2.
Gear-wise I've used only RP355 and Cort KX5.

Any useful critique is welcome. C4C
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          Last edited by some1fat at Aug 9, 2011,
          #2
          Song sounds good, nice production, drums and bass could be mixed a bit higher though but this song is mostly about the guitars anyway i guess like the solo's and the riffs alot, good tones as well, like it overall, also stays pretty listenable as an instrumental which is hard to pull off so good job on that too keep it up!

          C4C?: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27835887
          #4
          I really hate GP drums, but I think they do their job here. I think its a neat tune, but I'd rather see this as a song with vocals. I think the part at 2:34 would make a very good chorus.

          I like the production, it sounds good with the stuff you are using to record this.

          I'd love to see a vocal version of this song, it has lots of potential!

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          #5
          agree with the generic and needs vocals.... But then again I also feel you need to know that it was darn good, the mix was perfect. I know like I, and many others said it was generic, but generic is not bad its just nothing stands out in it. So if you ever write lyrics I hope you can make that be the IT factor of the song

          c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1468065
          #7
          yo man i love the song! im an experimental singer, could i put in some vocals in it and see if you like it? if yeah then FUn if not it ok, but yeah man it sounds good i wish i could create badass sounding drums for free but i can't find the software
          #8
          Quote by SikMind08
          yo man i love the song! im an experimental singer, could i put in some vocals in it and see if you like it? if yeah then FUn if not it ok, but yeah man it sounds good i wish i could create badass sounding drums for free but i can't find the software


          Yeah, sure. I'd love to hear this track with vocals... I just don't have any ideas for them.
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